【国際】金正恩氏 「たたきつぶす」とソウル標的に砲撃演習 [sc](★0)
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- 2016/12/02(金) 19:12:51.67
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>>4
There goes another painfully screwed-up English!!
>Arguing with Japanese people about historical questions
Tut tut tut. If you mean "歴史問題", it should be "historical issues".
>because they with us don’t share
Wrong. Should be "because they don't share with us"
>the historical COMMON SENSE, that Japan committed lots of war crimes
Remember that commas never come before the word "that".
And if you want to sound formal, as your sentences suggest you want to, "lots of war crimes" should be replaced with "a number of war crimes".
>against Asian peoples
*against Asian people
> some Western countries interested in Asian region
"Western countries" is not commensurate with "Asian peoples".
*westerners settled in Southeast Asia
> (for example, Britain and Netherland)
You can write without using those parentheses for no reason!
*such as Britain and Netherland
>, and slew 25-30 million Asians, most of which are civilians;
*and brutally took the lives of 25 to 30 million Asians, most of whom were civilians.
>; and as a result,
You have too many "ands" in succession.
*. As a result,
>the Empire of Japan with his evil desire to conquer the world was utterly subdued by the Allies power three score and ten years ago.
Doesn't make sense!!
*The fiendish thirst of the Empire of Japan to conquer the whole world was shattered by the Allied Powers 70 years ago.
>Even now injured Asian peoples
If you simply say "injured Asian peoples", it would literally mean any Asian in the world who's injured now, including a friend of mine who got a bruise on his leg while playing soccer!!!
*Even now, Asian victims
>regard Japanese as a beast of a man to whom killing others is great joy.
Learn how to use a relative pronoun correctly.
*Japanese are still seen as cruel people who take pleasure in killing by Asian victims of Japanese war crimes.
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